All Comments on 'Dream a Little Dream Of Me Pt. 02a'

What in the actual fuck was this? The first chapter was so good too. You could have literally not introduced anyone and have a great thought experiment about whether or not thinking about others while having sex with a loved one should be considered infidelity or not. Instead it reads like a high-school boys fantasy. Loving wife's needs to be split into two catagories with more serious stories were the sex is incidental vs just plain wank stories.

Seriously WTF!

I absolutely love this 5*

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How is he going to explain this to his parents?

Truly worth 5stars

Well, you did it- got yourself out of that corner you painted yourself in, in part 1. Picked up every loose thread and tied them into a neat bow. Well done, with a bonus thrown in with the conversation had with his parents. That was hilarious.

Great story! 5 Stars. This gem is outside the box. Keep writing!

Cute fantasy

I think two of the classifications for voting should be highly creative, and boring. This is highly creative and somewhat boring, but still a fun read.

Wow…I didn’t see it going in this direction. All the way up until he left his parents home I thought this was a reasonable tale, then somehow I miss or didn’t see the crazy Twilight Zone turn off.

While I'm not sure I agree with the direction this went, especially his reaction to Justine (Chris was still cheating, the partner's sex doesn't matter) and the ultimate polyamoric finish, there's no question that this was extremely well written and, with part 1, truly and exceptionally creative. Sure, it'd be nice to know how the dreams happened in the first place, but as you said . . . Twilight Zone. Outstanding!

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Looking forward to parts 2b-z!

Damn. A FMF marriage. Yeah, that could work, it seems the ladies can take care of each other when he's worn out.

Legally, I guess it's technically bigamy but there's no state document. I was taught seven years constitutes common law marriage... Divorce would be a real biotch. Is he supporting two wives? Shared expenses! Polygamy? Polyamory?

Telepathy over two states away? Neat concept. Justine, not Justin. But she was "full", stretched.

Thank you for writing this and sharing. I love, love, love your writing. Always 5 ⭐️s.

Sorry, just couldn't get my head around the story. 3*

RobertaBob is sneakily working his way up the charts with original ideas and the HDKish humorous running commentary.

Hez gonna be one worn out fella

imagination- great

story- not so much

we have mental trauma-check

cheating- check

happy ending- only in fantasy land

No, those who claim this was well written....yeah because they wanked to it, not because it was actually well written. It was tolerable at best.

She was still a cheating twat, but this was such a slogfest I didnt make it all the way down the first page.

It might be an outside the box story it just didnt click, at least for me.

This was a ridiculous ending

Not a Loving Wives story. Group Sex? Erotic Couplings? Fantasy/Science Fiction? So did he kill his parents? Polyamory is like junk food, or drugs. Fun at first, but eventually it ruins your life. OK, maybe just makes you really really ugly, and disgusting. Glad you think its such a great idea. If I knew you well enough to hate you I would wish polyamory upon you. Hey, maybe thousands of years of civilization's love affair with monogamy is just a fluke. I'm sure the current young hip bitcoinistas will figure out how to make it work. Long term? Sorry to be so mean; go ahead and try it. You don't need to let us know how it works out. There is not a plane crash that wasn't preceded by a plane flight. Enjoy your flight. And thanks for the effort.

Interesting twist. Definitely more of a happy ending conclusion than I expected at the end of chapter 1.

Not sure this is really the natural ending based on the direction chapter one was heading.

Not my thing, although unique.

I am somewhat disappointed with the way this turned out. Part one was so fantastic, you could have done amazing things with it, maybe she sees her dream Justin, or meets him somehow, then does she or doesn’t she, can her love for her husband keep her from tasting the forbidden fruit. Instead I think the threesome thing was just a cop out to turn this into just another erotic coupling story.

Robertabob, I’m not trying to insult you, you are a good writer, I guess I let the extraordinary first part build up my expectations too high. Thanks for your time and effort.

It's sometimes forgotten that every single written word, every recorded thought or flight of fancy is the visible manifestation of the creative energies of a unique human mind. Or, absent focused, purposeful, creative energies, perhaps they are just a whimsical rambling or a Jackson Pollock stab into the heart of artistic orthodoxy. Hell, Dr. Seuss did it. Why not Thee or We, You see? Both him and me and a lot of Thee. That makes We.

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5/5.

after part 1 this chapter is not at all what I expected. He was far too calm in chapter 1. He put up night after night of hearing her climax over some other guy and tell him her dream man was basically way better than her husband. So what happens? Turns out it is a female and they all live happily ever after?

Oh - and the sex talk with his parents? What the fuck! He goes to have a serious talk and his mom says had he been earlier he would have caught her with her legs up and open? Dad with Viagra can go hours but the problem is she is dry? Whoes parents talk like that to their kid especially when he is there for a serious life talk!

Never have commented before, but what freaking drivel!

Weird ?

Realization of the dream-person, took all the suspense out of the story.

How could a spouse defend against an idea. In this case, the appearance reduced the tension/actions, drama, of this story.

Gave this chapter 3⭐️s...You need to keep working on improving the plot of your storyline RobertBob. This went from exciting new idea to mediocre cheater story.

Thank you for the effort.

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Loved it, super weird and hilarious

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣two cats arguing in an alley".🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

two cats in an alley.....haha my wife said that was the funniest line she has seen in awhile.

I love your style of writing! Keeps the blood flowing in the perspective side of the brain...

Keep up the great work, I am humbled.

Conversation with parents: tried too hard for humor, got creepy instead. Polyamory? No thank you. Your writing is otherwise so good I gave you the gift of no score (didn't drag down your final). On to Pt. 02b.

That was really dumb.

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2 **

A 13 year old boys fantasy ⭐️⭐️

it gets more stupid as it goes, if even possible

A rather nice fantasy.