All Comments on 'Dream Cum True'

I not a story it’s a excerpt of a story, but page 1 of chapter 1 is good

Did not even finish.

Fine if you are a girl who likes the thought of having a dick in her pussy that not too long ago was up some guy's arsehole..

I liked it so far.... But where is the actual sex part?

Please continue, this is absolutely thrilling in the best way.

Loser writer

you're not a literary genius, you're writing smut on a porn site....maybe think about that if you decide to finish this open ended garbage.....(he said, smiling like the cat who ate the canary)