All Comments on 'Dream Girl Pt. 01'

Fantastic. A truly perfect fantasy and i really want more

Love love love! I think we have a lot in common ;)

Omg this had my dick stiff in my panties the whole time. Please give us more chapters. Love reading about bbc daddys turning whitebois like me into their girls

Wow that was so so hot! Wish that was me taking that bbc in my tight ass! Wishful thinking!!

If I were Stephanie and I got so much from that big black cock being in my ass I would ask Andre if I could go ahead and maybe take something or give me a real breasts and start dressing more like a girl and did you say anything to her friend Grace about what happened I know if that were me I'd say something to my friend about it and ask her to help me become more and more like a girl and I hope they continue the story even more

Wspaniałe, sam bym chciał się stać jak Steph - Stephania i doświadczyć tej zmiany z chłopca w dziewczynkę (maminsynek), też chciałbym tak zacząć damską bieliznę i ciuszki a następnie poczuć jak wchodzić we Mnie twardy fallus i strzela białym nektarem.

Ciekawe jak się dalej potoczyły losy Stephani Stepha i Andreasa oraz Grace i Dee.

Jesus that was incredible. Had me on edge the entire time, no touchy ;)

So hot! I find myself checking everyday for part 2. Hope it’s out soon!

This great please write some more to this it so needs more to his ride to become a girl and her true self

This was amazing. Hope it gets a sequel.

part 2 pls waiting since ages

Only issue here is Grace. What’s the deal with her whole being supportive and then disgusted. Pushing Steph into going with it then being a bitch later. The story was amazing and great. Loved the end but I would cut Grace from it or give her a massive attitude adjustment.

Oh god I love stories about ♠️ Big Black Cocks ♠️. This had me leaking pre-cum like a stream, I need a part 2 please.

Did you forget to put up the next part? waiting since ages!! cmmon

More please!

WOW!!!!! That was GREAT when you continue this PLEASE let me know at jennifercd22@yahoo.com

Thank You

OMG so amazing! Part 2 please!!!

Just....wow...

This is absolutely amazing and had so much potential… please write the second part eagerly waiting

I love it when it becomes love please part 2

Hope we see a part 2 soon, it definitely deserves it ❤️

Omg that was one amazing journey into euphoria.... Loved it xxx

Need part 2 this was absolutely amazing!

Damn! Where the hell is part 2!?

Wow, just wow, bring on part 2, great story and great build up well done

Why name a story prt 1 when there is obviously not a part 2

Oh wOwwwww! Excellent read

I made it half way down the first page. No straight guy in the situation at the airport in Gallegos would do anything but be pissed and jump on the next plane home. It would have made more sense to go back to the house before starting their shit and isolating him. To start the story that lazy, shows this story is much like others in this category, not much forcing of anything. He's going to relent every time he sees his little slut friend batting her eyes.

Oh my god, I luv this story, I only wish that was me, in my mind it was. That would be a dream cum true, to meet someone just like that and have him fuck my tight little ass and I would luv to suck that bbc and have him cum right down my throat. I would worship that bbc for ever. Boy do I need to cum so bad. I need a daddy just like this!

Great story!! Please keep going!!

Great story with an excellent ending. The one disgusting piece was that there is always some self absorbed bitch who only cares what she gets out of it. She knew that Andres wanted Stephanie because that greedy bitch basically uphold him without him having a clue about any of this. She is supposed to be his best friend? With friends like that, who needs enemies?

This story is really hot. I've never cum so hard as I did when Andres & Stephanie first made love, than I came again the same day a few hours later, as their passion build all that day, than during they're day date, onto when they came home making out with each other, gosh, that was so hot. I was throbbing as I read this build up of their passion. Than they fucked again, & omg I came so hard the second time thast day, just from reading this amazing story. "I'm in love" with this story please continue it. & thank you, very much.

BTW. I love this story, so much I had to download it onto my phone, so I can read it anytime I want. I've already cum several times having read the last three days. God!!! I love this story, , I love Andres & Stephanie's love story. Thanks again...

Don't know how I missed this story for a two years but I'm glad I've read it now,WOW I fucking love it, my clit has been leaking all through, definitely 5* but that doesn't seem enough, definitely favourite, I'm just about to read chapter two, absolutely love it ,Steph (been my alter ego for years and now seems even better)

Please keep this story going

Chapter one was fantastic! Kept my clit hard the whole time!

OMG ,WOW !

The detail alone is literally orgasmic !

I'm sooo chuffed to have stumbled across the incredible story telling genius you truly are 👏 ❤️