All Comments on 'Dream Lover'

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CorjixCorjixalmost 5 years ago
Wow - This Is A Good One!

Had no idea the ending was in store...was so engrossed in how you worded every sentence...how you carried me alongside, as you took your lover to you. "...but then things fade away." I felt the sadness that I feel when I am the one doing the 'dreaming'...all too often; all too much like this ending. Somehow I still feel encouraged! (and turned on) Thanks for that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Mmmmmm

Sweetie... You can wake me up that way anyday of the week!!!!

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