All Comments on 'Dream Lover Pt. 15'

But repetition and lack of purpose loses appeal. 15 chapters so far and apart from him learning this ability there is no purpose to the story. Sex is ok for a few chapters, but being the same sex every time is monotonous. The story needs an underlying reason to continue, and boring sex tales is not enough.

2* for getting this far before I gave up.

The author is correct- this chapter cannot be properly appreciated as a stand-alone story. This reviewer finds that to properly understand and appreciate this chapter, the previous ones should be read first. As to Chapter 15 itself, it is well-written, and the plot moves at a brisk (but not rushed pace). The love scene is very well done, and at no time does it hinder the story line, nor does one such scene ever seem to become repetitive or boring, thanks to the skill of the author both with words and with the plot. Five stars.