All Comments on 'Dreaming'

by FizzledSub

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mulehead61mulehead61over 14 years ago
A great dream and

Beautiful story. It sounds like you really put your heart in it!

PeachandCream83PeachandCream83over 14 years ago
It could be my dream cum true, mmmmmmm............

I can't wait to see if he returns and what he will do!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
wow

This story is a little too short. Maybe you can write an extended version of this story to make it even more exciting.

MoonLyricMoonLyricover 14 years ago
Amazing!

You Rock! I love your stories. They totally make me feel alive. Way to go!! I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.

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