All Comments on 'Dreaming in Boston'

A bit over dialogued and there really wasn’t much drama. Two people meet, get close and fall in love. OK, but where is the “story”? You write well, seem to know grammar and spelling and had very few typos. I encourage you to continue working on your writing and storytelling. 4*

The idea was more for my friend to have just that, a simple "idealistic" story. So I'm glad my intent wasn't missed. I'm working on story arcs in a lot of my other works. So hopefully those seem more interesting/dynamic.

You achieved what you set out to do — very nice, sensually romantic storyline. No, maybe not as captivating as some of your other art, but true to your biographical intentions: Catering Queen. Liked it very much.

LOVE IT!

Can you send me a woman like her?

I will be REALLY nice to her! :+))

Super sweet!!!!