All Comments on 'Dreaming of a World-Away Love'

a very sweet wet dream ;)... felt almost tropical...

the reverse sequence ending felt a little contrived..

Great first story HB...

The title gave me the impression that it would be about a love that was seperated by distance. But you don't reveal her identity at all. Don't worry yourself about my misconceptions.

All in all, I thought it was a sweet, erotic story. Very well done.

Jenny