All Comments on 'Dreaming Of Daddy'

Okay for your first time out not bad! It was refreshing to see that you wrote it like a letter to your daddy. While it's not in the style I usually spend time reading, your approach was original. You definitely could tell that the girl is love with her father. Don't let negative feedback beat you down...read all the other stories in the archives about dad/daughter relationships and hone your promising skills!

Really enjoyed your story....i found it very erotic and found myself very aroused...especially liked the part of the daddy standing behind his daughter......Keep up the good work

Good story, quite hot, wonderful subject matter. THe description of the sex scenes was fantastic. Other parts could use a bit more description, but overall, a strong, arousing first outing.

I read many stories on literotica but this for sure one of the best story i,ve ever read. Congratulation the Lizzy Ross for such a nice and well plotted imaginary story.Well continue your work Lizz

mujahid

I read your story...twice..smile...and how erotic it was...but if I were her father, I would have wanted to take my time and slowly , gently consumed her young soft warm body...slowly and teasingly play with her young nipples

I hope you will write again

Have you read any of the stories written by LizzyRose. She is an exciting new auther. She only has a few stories posted, but they are all very hot and well done. I hope you all enjoy them as much as I have.

Michael

hot and heavy

I wanted to be one of the other girls that said sex is so good I asked my uncle about it he said first thing you have to do is suck the guy and swallow his cum I said ok can you teach me how to do it he said ok take off all your clothes and pull my dick out and start sucking he said ok lay down he popped his dick in me and went slow at first and then he was going fast and he made me scream he was big and it felt so good he said want me to cum in you I said yes he filled me up he said now your a tramp and can go fuck all the boys you want just bring them here to do it so I can watch

had me dreaming of being your daddy hehe