All Comments on 'Dreamland Pt. 01'

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nthusiasticnthusiasticalmost 4 years ago

Nice Start

You write very well, and it’s an intriguing premise, however I do hope future submissions will be longer. Thank you.

GillianBxGillianBxalmost 4 years ago
And now ...

... after the bare breasted lady, tell me the way it was, and I'll be listening, very intently. XO - Gill.

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