All Comments on 'Dreams of Heroism Pt. 01'

by Cathetel

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HamsterHamsterover 5 years ago
Continue, please

Well I, for one, would like to know where this will end up. Nobody actually thinks about how super powers must take some pretty extensive practice to control and use constructively. It will be interesting when super strength meets its first romantic interlude.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nicely done!

A different take on an idea we all know about. And a good read to boot. Two thumbs up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Interesting.......this has Potential

It would be fun to see Rachel right a few wrongs and get laid in the process.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Well written

A good story line well presented and written to a good standard, not always the case on this forum.

I'm looking forward to the following instalments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Interesting story

It’s always cool to see sort of, more ‘day to day’ situations in stories with characters like this, I would love to see more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
great intro!

I really hope you pick this back up some day. Love all of your other writing as well!

mithanialmithanialalmost 5 years ago

Very well written would love to see this character expanded upon.

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Update 4-9-20 First and foremost, can I just say Coronavirus sucks and I hope that each and every one of you is safe and secure during these trying times. Your health is all you have, so please take care of it. Chapter 13 is published! Woot. Started to think I'd never get an...