All Comments on 'Dreams of Him'

You did that perfectly! Great story!

Yes. Your take on the plot is a great positive turn on. Amazing story. Loved it.

You are always good with your work.

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Well done!

5 Stars! Well done. What a fun fantasy, and a really good story.

while i was expecting the story to unravel in so many different ways , none of them involved the ending you gave the story , but i liked it ,so well done , i liked the way you have left it open for a 2nd chapter . Did she ignore her mums privacy ? or what other ways the chapter go , but that is upto you .

What ever you decide is down to you , but thankyou for the time and effort you have put into your story for us the readers .

Good story.

Fresh take on an old theme.

Well done

I liked this story a lot but for one thing. A "gout" of cum? Is that an expression anyone else is familiar with?

Likely not the best word I could have used, but I've seen it used to describe amounts of blood and other bodily fluids in other stories.

gout /ɡout/

noun

LITERARY

a drop or spot, especially of blood, smoke, or flame. "gouts of flame and phlegm"

This story kept me on the edge of my seat from start to finish! Unique, creative, fun and not ridiculously over the top. Using the diary as a means to tell much of the story was brilliant!