All Comments on 'Dressmaker's Dummy'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
A bit short

This might’ve been a great scene as part of another work, but it just seemed like it needed something more... maybe more lead up and anticipation (scenes leading up to it, maybe her sisters helping her but always shooing him off when he tried seeing what they were doing) or more about what she does to him once she traps him

It just seems unfair to even rate it as it is

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