Drink Me

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Full lips claimed hers firmly before pulling back, "I very much want that."

"Good," Alice blushed again while pulling on her clothes. "Then I'll see you later?"

Shayne nodded before planting one more kiss on the blushing woman.

Once outside the tent, Alice took a deep breath. She located the bathrooms quickly which, thankfully, didn't have a very long line yet. After, she went in search of her friends and their tent. It didn't take long for her to get her bearings, their site was littered with cans and snack wrappers. Fern and Kyla's shoes were outside the door, as was a pair of tennis shoes Alice didn't recognize. She opted to knock on the side of the tent and quietly call her friends' names.

"Kyla? Fern? You in there?"

The flap unzipped almost immediately. "ALICE!" Kyla tumbled out elbows first into the dirt. "We were so worried about you!" Alice took in her friend's disheveled appearance. Kyla had on a pair of boxer shorts and her lacy bralette. Her makeup was smeared and a false eyelash was stuck up on her eyelid. She leapt from the dirt and pulled Alice into a hug. "Don't scare us like that again!" she shouted as she hit Alice's arm.

"Is that our brat?!" Fern's voice admonished from the tent. "Get in here and explain yourself!"

Alice poked her head in to find a mostly naked Fern shoving a large, muscular form off her body. The man was also naked, apparently having lost his boxers to Kyla. Fern pulled a t-shirt over her head and climbed out in just that and her underwear. "Hi Fern."

"Don't you 'hi Fern' me!" she spun Alice around, inspecting her. "Well, you look in one piece. So, tell us, where did you spend the night, hm?" Her beautiful eyes flickered with mischief.

"Oh uh, I met someone. I stayed in her tent."

"Damn. I'm impressed, little Alice," Fern smiled.

"Oh leave her alone, Fernie," Kyla cut in. "Come on, get that hunk out of our tent so we can change and shower."

The man was not easy to wake, but Fernanda had experience with getting guests out who had overstayed their welcome. They gathered clothes and joined the queue for showers. Most of the morning was reserved for recovery and eating actual food. The group Fern had introduced them to joined in a campfire and they all cooked together. Alice endured some good natured teasing for being the one to do the disappearing act the previous night.

When the late afternoon sun turned the sky a heart-stopping blue, they gathered their things and dressed for another evening of music. Alice followed the throng through the gates, this time with cherry red lips and equally salacious eyeshadow.

Up on the scaffolding surrounding the venue, black lights threw everything into strange relief. Whites screamed out, from full jumpsuits to the little pin-pricks of lint on darker clothes. Everything was bright, but almost two dimensional in the space, confusing the eye and tricking the brain. Alice took a long swig of the drink in her hand and spun a circle to enjoy the view of all the thrusting bodies.

Purple cat ears sitting high on top of clacking braids and a fuschia bikini top caught her attention. She called out. Shayne turned under the black lights as she heard Alice's cry. Her makeup tonight was mostly white with electric blue accents. The white eyeliner contrasted fantastically with her dark skin and glowed under the lights as her eyes flashed in recognition at the sight of Alice. A slow smile spread across her face, each of her perfect, white teeth catching the black lights and glowing brilliantly.

"Alice!" She wound her way until she was right in front of the blonde. "I'm so happy to see you. Care to have another drink with me?"

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Roti8211Chanai643Roti8211Chanai64317 days ago

I want more of Alice and Shayne, the next night, the next week if there is one....

This has so much potential to be a bigger story!

Thank you

Runner4069Runner4069over 1 year ago

Well, that's thoroughly messed up in a wonderful sort of way! I am glad she escaped the evil queen and king and found Shayna and I'd like to read more of them together post festival and see if the "magic" lasts beyond that pill. Having never taken pills before, this was a good reminder to not change that any time IMO, but each to their own. I appreciate your talent and wonderful writing/storytelling ability, so as always thanks so much for sharing!

okami1061okami1061over 1 year ago

As always, your craft is near perfect. But I found the story to be totally meaningless. Especially the drugged up sex; a waste of good words. No part of this story was worth reading ... as a story.

The crazy imagery was moderately good, but ONLY to those who've experienced something like it. Those without that real life experience cannot even begin to understand it. Ultimately, being drugged out is psychotic, and describing psychotic behavior is a losing battle no matter how good you are as a writer. It's the main reason that serial killer stories are boring, or a fantasy where magic has no rules. It gives the writer free reign to pull as many rabbits out of their hats as they wish (pun maybe intended) preventing the audience from engaging; it turns them in to stumps, only able to wash and unable to think because the story is chaotic, without rules, and ultimately unpredictable ... like Alice's drug trip.

But, craft-wise, this story perhaps failed in one important way that MIGHT have made it palatable. As presented, it violated the usual implied objectivity of the 3rd person observer. As presented, in 3rd person, it didn't fly because a 3rd person could not have "gotten into" the head of a drugged out moron like this little girl. However, presented 1st person, it would have been Alice telling her own story from her own perspective and therefore could not be a violation of the implied contract between writer and reader to be honest in the story presentation. Unreliable narrator stories can be presented in 3rd person but ONLY when the 3rd person is made to be a part of the story (such as a participant telling a story in purposely distorted flashback fashion). And, of course, a 1st person story *always* contains a bit of unreliable narrator.

But, as presented, I actually wanted this stupid little girl to end up dead in a ditch just like her sister warned her. She was in no way endearing, as stupidity rarely is.

Nicole2023Nicole2023over 1 year ago

Love it, hope to read more of them

shayneoneshayneoneover 1 year ago

i liked it to you got good reviews you are talented the sex was good but i liked the ending more be happy well and safe a fan shayne

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