by SexyBeast
Well done in a way thats more believable than most daddy/daughter stories...
Small name mix up early on page 1 was a slight hiccup but a 5/5 in my book
Well written and other than some grammatical errors, all in all, very good story. I do hope you continue with the storyline. I think daddy likes the idea of linsey joining in.
omg this one was nastier than the first. i loved it. masturbated through the whole thing. wonderful. hopefully ben can fuck all 3 of his daughters. anxious to read the last chapter.
I just knew that Lindsey HAD to be next...
loved the detail, the use of dialogue
very hot
good writing ... excellent story ... very hot and sooo nasty ... PLEASE keep it going