All Comments on 'Drought Means Family Bath Time'

A different venue to pursue Mom and the Sisters. Nice to see the girls are so polite in setting the cue for Jack. Full participation in conservation, yes, conservation within the family.

This could be something hot if you continue !

Love it! Hopefully there's more to come!

Fun story. Can't wait to go read pt 2!

Why do you randomly switch between past and present tense? Very poor writing.

Not too bad, can't get around how he knew his moms eyes were closed as she was sitting in front of him or how he could see her but hole when she was sitting on his lap.

Too impossible but fun if water conservation was imperative...

Dialog seemed juvenile & I could only rate a 3 star...