by julie_hypnotic
The submission "Drowning With Rain" is the best Erotica I have ever read. The author's bio states that she is "hypnotizing the world, with words" and this story does exactly that. Outstanding author.
That was a beautiful piece. I hope Peter and Allie take Rain with them on their journeys.
Betsey
I identified with Peter in this alluring story. I just turned 60 yet retain my full passion, tempered by a bit of experience, for erotic and loving sex between consensual adults. You have a wonderful gift of painting a word picture that places me, bodily, in the midst of your story.
What a beautiful story! The author must be truly a sensitive, sensual and very passionate woman to write like this.
Wow! Whats not said is how Rain got to be that old and still a virgin. And did you really have to put a finger in her ass that first time? A little unrealistic there.