All Comments on 'Drowning in the Wake Ch. 01'

Love this. Love the writing. Please keep it coming ;)

Beautiful. I'm in absolute aww of how simple yet engaging your concept is. My only criticism would be the point of view, may just be subjective but i think this story would have been so much more effective if told in first person, almost begging your audience to immerse themselves in her emotions. Regardless, exceptional work!