by Salixx
A slow burner which has strengthened both plot and character development considerably I the last 2 chapters. SrV
You are what writerannebelle tries to be. You deserve the same amount traction for your story like House full of Horny Monsters has. This is what it tries to be. You are a great writer, keep it up
The only criticism I can think to offer is that the introduction of the "disturbing area" and what it meant was so casual that I almost missed it at first pass. Could have been fleshed out a bit more. Still loving this story obviously.