All Comments on 'Drunk on Love'

Thank you for sharing your story, more please.

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Congrats! Fine job of accepting and completing your challenge.

Sweet story, didn’t really even need the sexual encounter. Could have stood alone without it, but was tasteful. 5*. Hope you’ve got more.

Excellent first effort. Please keep your creative juices flowing by contributing more stories.

Well done. You've included everything good fiction requires. the plot, characters, dialogue, separation, love, conflict, character transformation, strengthening relationship, and love again, a nice ending.

Nice sexual pieces. Certainly is good writing. Challenge met I think!