All Comments on 'Drunken Harry'

I hate cocksucking sluts and cuckold husbands, but have to recognize the quality of the execution and that probably it was the best solution for Harry!

This is not you usual fare.

It made me feel sorry for Harry.

In reality this would have never went down like this.

She should have told Harry right off the bat and Harry should have emasculated Ken. And put the fear into the rest of them.

Then worked their proplems out.

Thanks for writing!

Damn good job on this one....you just keep getting better man...

Jana would have asquired a STD or two to pass on to Harry since she was getting gangbanged bareback. So much for loving Harry!

I don't know why JPB would write such a stupid story since he is smart enough to know the story is not possible.

First, unless they are already are crazy, sex does not cause women to suddenly become sex crazy and lose control that up until that time they had.

Second, the moment Ken attempted to blackmail her she would call the police and the police would get a search warrant, and Ken would be arrested and sent to prison for blackmail and rape. The court and the police would not release the photos. However, they would be used as proof that Ken was guilty of rape and blackmail. Likely Ken would go to prison for at least 20 years. No way, no how would Ken risk 20 years in prison for a piece of tail. Without any doubt,JPB knows that and yet he writes a stupid story that he knows is impossible.

He has to be smart enough to realize that it is just a story. When you read fiction, you have to have a willing suspension of disbelief. Not everything you read has to be plausible or even possible. Hell, JK Rowling made a mint off of a fantastical tale of magic and mayhem. Most people would say it couldn't be real, but people loved the story anyway. Same with most fiction.

I know, there are stories some like, and stories that some don't like. But Dwornock should be smart enough to know that it's just a story and not over analyze it...then again, I'm probably giving too much credit to Dwornock for being smart.....

May include the best line in Lit ever, " ...I heard "replaced the tub with a tub with water jets and tore out..." and I faded out again. The bedroom door opened and I heard "...master bedroom fully equipped with the best cocksucker and piece of ass in the state. Moving on we co..." and he (or I) faded out again."

As LW satire this is an underappreciated gem. 5*

Was that Harry had hired a PI. And the PI had hours and hours of not only her cheating and using her body to close the contracts. He also had video of the men beating Ken. When Harry's lawyer got done, the Company was in bankruptcy, the men and his soon to be ex wife were in prison for a variety of crimes. Harry cleaned out the men and the Company in his Civil lawsuits and was retired to a tropical island before the jail house doors shut on the men and his now ex wife. Well played Harry!

to lose yourself and your pride,. TK U MLJ LV NV

This is a classic example of JPB bullshit! The score says it all. Too bad there is no 0 score.

And he destroyed her when he made sure everyone possible got a copy of her in action that he had in Safe Deposit box at the bank. So in the end, everybody lost big time. Even dumb old Bert spent years in jail for beating Ken. Really one of your worst stories Bob.

On the one hand Harry got rid of a cheating cunt (granted it started out as blackmail, but she ended up liking it!) and corporate whore, on the other he got to keep tapping her ass!

story. Way too much fantasy!!!

Its OK, they don't care much for you either. I wonder why?

It was Harry's fault? He just got drunk. She is the one who teased, and flirted and finally someone wouldn't take no for an answer. How is that Harry's fault. I'll never understand female logic. The whole premise of the story is kind of dumb. That's why this is only a 3 Star Rating.

I liked the story better when the victim of the blackmail shot the asshole - mafia style - twice in the chest and one in the head!

JPB demonstrating how hideous his stories/ideas are

Glad Harry saw the light at the end. Hopefully he cleans up his act.

I agree with Mauser45 on this story. Sometimes Bob just missed completely.

Another in the long line of garbage.

Pure garbage.When threaten with blackmail all she as to do is go to the police.

When JPB's stories are rated less than 4, you can almost bet that they are dumb storylines, super wimp husbands, or super slut wives. He knows it. We know it. So why do readers continue to make derogatory comments on low rated stories? The rating tells you they are probably not worth reading. Just skip and move to a 4+ story.

The worst stories are no longer open for comments. When I see them I know JPB went over the cliff again.

I've read this story a few times and it grows on me. True she mishandled the situation with Ken wrong but she did what was needed. Divorce Harry and free him from being married to a whore. I did like the line where she told Ken she would his head in with a cast iron skillet.

you have some loyal readers. LOVE slap hapy papy #9

One more moronic imaginary story about imaginary blackmail. This type of plot is so retarded that I have to question anybody's IQ who writes one. Why don't you get tired of repeating this sorry garbage? 1 star.

Load of crap.

Loved the story, but as so many of them have been, I was disappointed with the ending. Would have liked to have seen Harry blow his brains out and then see what she thought about that.

Hot story! 5 stars But I think she should have confessed, asked forgiveness and gave hubby a choice. I would have kept her!

I know this story is fiction, but if a woman behaves this way sexually, no sane man ( husband or ex- husband ) would want to have anything to do with her.

Do any of the crew have jobs or wives? It seems like it would be tough for them to get all the free time to do Jana.

Knew the ending long before it arrived.