by Crunk0n_TrunkJunk
"To be continued...".
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No chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story ALWAYS earns an automatic rating of 1.
nice try, but the constant (nearly every paragraph) changes in POV are really disjointed and off-putting. Look up 3rd person and try it sometime.
Honestly I think itnhas potential but the swapping between characters so much is confusing and takes away from the story. Kinda ruins it for me
Swapping every 3 sentences is too confusing to follow, and adding the cousin like that after how the family felt towards the one son is stupid asf
Amazing work! Please keep it up. I need part 2 and soon! Gotta know what happens with mommy and his sisters.
I love this story. Please post more. I want to see more of Ross and his mom.
Yeah I gotta hear the rest man. Dry humping a big ass in spandex is a big fetish for me. Especially when it's prone and the guy is just riding her big ass, enjoying all plush softness of it. Pretty much what Ross was doing to his mom in the second part of the story (very hot). And in spite of the vast array of sexual fetishes on the internet, stuff like this isn't all that easy to come across. So I'm begging ya man, you gotta put out a follow up.