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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Incredible

I wish there was more to this. What a great story. Simply wonderful, you have quite a gift!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Delicious!

Possession, corruption, and transformation. Very nice. Well written as well. Great job.

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I'm now also publishing erotic stories on Smashwords under the pen name Jane Mesmeri. If you like what I've posted here, you might want to check me out.