All Comments on 'Dualism. Ch. 02: Astral'

Definitely good on the pacing here. Ch 1 was all over the top and such but it was necessary for the stakes. Keep working at it and don't lose that muse. This story is delicious.

I’m loving the story so far and I can’t wait for the next chapter

Enjoying the story. Your pace is good.

Please get help with your writing. Small things need adjusting: paragraphing, incorrect words, structure using quotes, plus other minor things.

With this sorted you could be one of the top writers.

Contact me if you would like some help.