by EgmontGrigor2020
A good story. I think you could have made this into a 3 chapter series. I liked the characters you introduced and their dialogue. Thanks for your time and imagination.
I wonder how many people, outside of Oz, actually get your sense of humour?
Don't stop, it's marvelous.
19pvc44
Somewhat predictable and fanciful, although unrealistic [unless, of course, all English girls are horny because English men are "untutored]." Decently written.