All Comments on 'Dude! We Need To Talk!'

Good story!

5

Great fun and sexy read. 5stars

You did make some bad spelling errors but nothing worth a hanging over. I think Amy should have had a baby with her just for the intensity. You wrote a creative story, not too much sex detail, I feel that gets boring fast. More detail would be welcome by me at least, doing something you didn't want to do in a place you didn't want to be, isn't much to go on unless the reader has preconceived notions. Nice job in all.

I guess that was bros before hoes if Jimmy was going to rat out Nora. Probably what most readers here want, but doesn’t what happens in Miami stay in Miami?

Helluva coincidence but played out pretty well even though it breaks the stated premise.

But you almost lost me when you started with:

"Leave him alone, assholes!" I said with as much vibrato as I could muster…”

I’m guessing you meant “bravado”?

He wasn’t singing at them.

Nice twist! I’m a sucker for some fun romance. It didn’t hurt that Jimmy acted like an adult and not a petulant little child.

Thank you!

Nice twist at the end.

Damn good twist at the end. Great story. 5 stars.

Hmmm...

Now that she's married... wonder if Nora will attend another convention

Jimmy will be sweating bullets when the day comes.

Well, he got warned.

Nice little twist!

Good story with a nice twist.

No. And hell no. Why would anyone marry a slut like that? Sluts don't stop being sluts just because they are married.

Could have been hot with their reunion. You kind of screwed it up with all the tattle-tale stuff. Still though, a good story.

I like it. Mike was a solid friend. 5 Stars.

Tanqueray

not bad, but it would have been so much better had his fiancé been Amy.

Knowing your best friend knows your wife inside and out is the ultimate mind fuck.

A real good ending.

A very good story, with the surprise twist that had us believing that his buddy's fiancee would turn out to be Amy.

Thanks also for the unintended humor: 1)When he spoke to the two goons beating on his friend-to-be, it was done with all the vibrato he could muster. Was it also done with bravado? 2) When she "began to ungulate on my needy dick," I hope she left enough to undulate on also. Ungulates are vegetation eating animals that have multi-compartmental stomachs (cows, sheep, etc.).

RJDinNY

Over used "dude". otherwise decet.

Standard comment from the morally bankrupt ReedRichards. This guy is why everyone needs a lawyer.

Eject, eject. Just a bunch of a trash, reveling in it with each other.

To the anon who commented on my “vibrato” error, thanks dude! Your comment was hilarious! I sometimes use voice to text, but that was probably my stupid ass and not Siri. Still chuckling as I write this.

Tell me a cuck story without saying its a fucking cuck story.

Knew you couldn't resist, that mental illness being buried in Odoreaters closet isnt doing you any favors.

Sucked, much the way you wish you had enough guts to try it for yourself.

Anony wrote: "No. And hell no. Why would anyone marry a slut like that? Sluts don't stop being sluts just because they are married."

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Sure hope you married a virgin, and a woman who really doesn't like sex that much, because it's clear: you think any woman who isn't married and has sex is a slut.

Really nice story. *****

CLever twist, liked this one. Thanks!

5 stars - I guess there won't be any more nurses conventions in Miami - for these women at least.

Dude! Dude! Dude! Too many dudes dude! Also Amy should get checked for an ear infection with as many times as she did the head tilt thing...thanx!

Loklie

I like how this ended. All's well that ends well. Thanks for the nice twist for a fun story.

Guess it doesn't really matter. It would be a mediocre story in any category. Does seem odd that Amy and the Dude didn't exchange info. and keep in touch with each other. But I guess that would have messed up your whole gotcha plot device. Kind of silly, but thanks for the effort.

dude!

Nice twist that guaranteed that everyone could go home happy.

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Gotta agree with Anonny: "vibrato" is what Bocelli uses to sing opera. So if he calls out, "Leave him alone, assholes!" with as much vibrato as he could, it means that his voice is trembling. A lot. Glad Anonny caught that.

“Undulate” not “ungulate” on his dick…

dude dude dude , what are you ? Ten

That's it?

Meh, would have preferred a bit more but OK for a short story I guess.

The dude shit got old really fast

Good twist at the end

Fantastic job! This was special.

Great read. Had me till the end.

A very entertaining and well told story. It was fun reading! 5*!!

I really liked it, almost to the loved it stage, not quite, but all most. Good story with a fun twist at the end. Thanks

Different twist!!

Cute little twist, I liked. Thank you

Lovely little story about love and ships passing in the night never to meet again, but they do.

This story gives me blue balls lol. It's so close to being something good, but then just craps out. This really could have been a great multi-chapter story. Mike and Amy literally don't even talk after their reunion in this story.

A nice story. The confrontation with Jim was well done. Four stars. Ÿ

BE CAREFUL WHAT YOU SAY AND TO WHOM AND ABOUT WHOM.

You write better-than-average stories, and I intend to read them all, but they could be so much better if you could have them proofread by someone with a good vocabulary and spelling ability. The following errors really broke the flow of the story for me: vibrato instead of bravado, fantisying instead of fantasizing, ungulate for undulate (unless she grew hooves), and trough instead of through. A few other minor changes could have made this a terrific story. I'm not trying to tear you down. I'm trying to make you a better writer.

Good yarn. Well told. Nice twist at the end

Nice story , I liked it. AAAA++++

Nice. 5 stars

That was a good one hahaha

Lots of fun. Thanks.

Nice story, but not finished. What happens with him & Amy?

Stupid Jimmy should get Nira to sign a pre-nup!!

All 3 were trailer trash bitches

Liked the twist at the end.

Not the ending I was expecting! I enjoyed it!

Great little story. I was thinking the fiancée was going to be Debby.

Great twist!

Nice twist.

Nice twist: 5.

Interesting developments. Well told although I could use a fewer "Dude!" in the dialogue.

Good twist.

Stupid assholes should get the bitches to sign prenups and include a strict clause about infidelity. These 3 whores will always be cheaters

What happened to Amy's "someone special"? And to the Anon before me; lighten the fuck up.