All Comments on 'Duncan's Gentle Touch Ch. 04'

Great story. Very Hot. Loved it!!!!

I loved it! I've enjoyed reading about Duncan and Marty so much-I feel like I should offer them congratulations on their happy future together :)

Simply beautiful!! I loved its gentle build-up

That was absolutly amazing...You are very talented...I loved the way you made it sensual and intimate and not just sex...

I'm just sad it's over now... :(

Wow! That was an amazing story. I absolutely loved it. The romance, the emotion, and the love and respect that they had for each other was overwhelming. I am so glad that you took your time with this story. It was so hot and sweet that even me, (a straight girl) damn near came in my panties. Great job.

If this really happened U two are so lucky, it was hard not to have a hard on from the first story to the last and then enjoying the orgasm that followed. Thanx

excellent

You are very talented and the love and passion and heat you described was all but too real. Incredibley amazing. It was one of those stories that gave me that sinking feeling in the pit of my stomach. You should be commended for your efforts in this story. Truely superb.. Well done.

This was absolutely gorgeous, and so incredibly hot. Brilliantly written. Thanks so much!

i really enjoyed these works; the story is a great one to read slowly and relish.

Now that was hot!!! Thank you so much for another perfect story, again excellent writing. Hope you two still have a great time together and are enjoying it.

I really enjoyed your story it was amazing from start to finish! Can't wait to read other stories by you! Keep up the great work!!

I also am a straight girl and the story made me come. It was So incredibly passionate. Thank you so much.

I'm a strait girl,

and you make me wish i was a gay man.

congratulations! and keep up the good work

the whole story was amazing, great writing and awesome buildup (:

This was such a hot sensual story. The opening shower scene was amazing. Sexy as Hell! Loved it and I wish there was more.

a really good erotic read

SO HOTTTTT!!!!

Superb finale. Two very lucky men, not pressured or tricked by outside forces, found each other. Successful, sensual series.

Loved the slow buildup to the final sex act.

This is one of the best stories i have had the pleasure of reading

thank you for sharing

This story will give me hours of self abuse,oh how I wish that I could sample one of those cocks.

free and liberated and just doing what feels good and doing it hard for you and your partner, down and dirty yeaahhh

Will the sequel have wedding bells? Please!

it's a great story, slow, unhurry and lovely....but for me it's just a beginning of something bigger and deeper. Please continue, this is really special.

Hot slow romance, beautiful and erotic!

I loved it, brought back some great memories of when I first started out with my male lover. My wife was gone for a period of time and it was neighbor friend who kept me company. He also was the one who introduced me to being 'bare.' He shaved my penis, my balls, and my anus. He then removed all my body hair except for my head and eye brows. While my wife was away for a long period (two months) we made love all the time. When she got home she noticed I was shaved, she liked and asked about the change. I broke down and told her about my new male lover. I thought she would be upset. To my suprise, she was very happy because she had set it up. She was happy that everything worked out like she had planned. So my friend Keith and I do many things together with his and my wife's blessing. Including making love to eachother. Keith and I just celebrated our ten year anniversay by having a symbolic union with our wives "giving" us away. I want to hear more about you and Duncan.

Wonderful story, gentle and passionate.

But weak spelling is distracting and breaks the flow of the narrative.

Try:

"Jason cock extended to ITS full length."

"IT'S awesome, exclaimed Duncan."

I am so thankful that this story orbited its way to me. What a fantastic build up of love, lust, passion, innocence and exploration. More than 5 stars for each chapter. Thank you for sharing it.

-KK

the only weakness for me was the first time anal sex itself. these boys were miracles yet neither has a prostate which would def have made an appearance in the two final sex weekends.