All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 01 Ch. 28'

Great chapter. (fucking cliff hangers)

I think by now you're just doing the 'Lana Fulmine' shit just to annoy. It's one person, we know who it is, she's been around since like the 4th 'chapter'.

Despite numerous suggestions from some readers you continue to kill a story with such great potential.

1. Lana Fulmine - we get it. We know her name. Thanks

2. Tiny chapters that make the reading so disjointed and broken to cause annoyance in reading. I would rather wait a month for a healthy well written chapter, than feeling like I'm watching a DBZ fight that takes 7 episodes of monologue before the action starts.

3. You seriously can't waste one of your "precious" tiny chapters on repetitive sex that has gotten predictable since chapter 6.

I'm at the point where I am interested in the plot of this story but would rather just quit it and find another writer in this genre. I hate that I was enjoying this story yet more often than not, I'm left annoyed after reading