All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 03 Ch. 13'

The last two chapters have been the best out of this entire series. You're a good writer when you don't try to go all-in on the never ending harem orgies. Those have their place, but not 5 chapters in a row. Keep up the good work.

I would second that previous comment. Your sex scenes are, respectfully, terrible. They are repetitive and lack grammatical complexity and/or proper grammar at all. Your plot chapters are great. It's almost as two different people are writing with such a quality difference. Instead of writing 30/70 plot/sex, you should be writing 80/20 and your story would be much better. The sex scenes would sound less forced, unimaginative, and boring if there were fewer.

More adventure to come, Leo should be in with more Power and maybe more Monster girls.

Love this story line please write more soon can hardly wait for the next many books to come out thank you for your gift