by winterwhereof
Love the political angle, it gives the world and story depth, things the character would like to do, but either can't or does with consequences. Sofia is slowly getting closer, the contacts with the older students fun. Anyway, hooking up with Camille would be politically smart - having both a Beaumon and Gylver friends would cover a lot. It sounds like Parda-Halt is being setup as the bad guy.
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I’m loving it! Not sure why there are so few comments from the readership? 5 stars all the way so far. Thank you
I'm not normally a fan of futa stories but I find myself really enjoying this series! The world building and lore that you have come up with is great as has me hooked!
Another good chapter(s). I'm interested in seeing where this is going. Are we going to end up with some kind of harem scenario? Are there going to be any boys in the mix?
Very great story so far! Five stars.
The only issue is that, while I understand that it was *intentional* that Natalie was written as an incredibly bitchy and dense character, that doesn't mean it's *pleasant* to have a protagonist with that personality. Her one-sided vendetta against Sofia might get points for dramatic irony, but the lack of relatability negates that.
I hope this will be an opportunity for character growth as she realizes that Sofia hasn't wronged her, and that is Natalie is the only one who has been horrible to Sofia.