All Comments on 'Dungeons and Dalliances Ch. 180-189'

I loved this story up till now. But you are really just a rapist. Up till now, the story is good and the characters are great.p, But this chapter is just about humiliation and degradation. Nothing but the victimisation of a character. Put this in the rape section that it deserves, or get back to actually writing a story like you started out doi

Please disregard Aeralito. Carry on.

More adventure, less sex, though. And/or, make the outside sexual encounters a smaller part of each chapter, please. I enjoy the naughty dungeon adventures more.

I rather enjoyed these chapters. Thanks for sharing and carry on!

great job. I think you have a nice balance between adventure and sex. Some chapters have more adventure, some have more sex.

Great work on this installment of chapters! Looking forward to reading about the next dungeon! I'm also excited to see Nat get even with Ana and put her through her paces with the newly upgraded equipment!

Mm, gotta agree with Aeralito on this one. That definitely had some very rapey vibes to it.

I mean come now. “She looked like she wanted it” is basically the excuse for zero consent given here. That.. is kind of the standard definition, isn’t it?

Anyway. It’s fantasy and I don’t mind, but there’s a reason that category exists. People who don’t want to read it are not wrong in being offended by the wrong category.

How many times dose a person need to consent before troons stop calling it rape to invite that person to have mind blowing sex?

You're doing great things with your story. Good job

Another hot and heavy one

One of my favorite stories on the site, genuinely. Keep it up!

Good story, but there are some holes I can't figure. Why wasn't Sofia wearing her collar during her pet training sessions, that was a lot of wasted xp for that item.

Also, if they know what their weapon damage rating is, why doesn't she know the gathering rating of her heavy weapon, or at least notice an increase of her gathering rating?

You're getting so good at describing what's going on and painting the scene. Very exciting to see you grow as a writer