All Comments on 'Dungeons and Dicks Ch. 01'

Okay, this was super hot.

It kind of went from 0 to 60, and then from 60 to 1000 out of nowhere, but I don't think it would have added anything to add realism (and 5 chapters) to believably build up to the promiscuous fun.

I know you've already written the follow-ups. I hope some actors with the 'huge packages' can somehow make an appearance in the future.

A bunch of nerdy cucks and skanks, using D&D as an excuse. Pathetic, and puts the game and its fans in an already stereotypical lame, awful place. If you had the slightest respect for the game, your characters (or at least a few of them) would revolted against this sick shit.

This story was awesome. Long time reader on this site, but I've never taken the effort to comment before. The way you create and build the tension in this piece is fantastic. 10/10

As a former DM, I can't speak to whether the D&D setting limits your audience, but I thought you leveraged it quite effectively. I'm not sure what the d8s were about, but I'll chalk it up to the "alternate system." ;) Anyway, great story, looking forward to the rest!

5 stars

What Edition is this supposed to be. It is clear not AD&D or 3.5?

The whole thing seemed to be a sex story masquerading as a Dungeons & Dragons game.

Why didn't we get to see their stats and HP?

Eberron setting has a pantheon for clerics. Not as good as the blood of Vol or the Dragon below, in my opinion but you can have more than one deity.

I know nothing about D&D but if this is it, I’m in!

Just one point is sticking in my craw. Tess and the DM are hosting so why do they keep saying just wait till we get home - they are home. I'm loving this story . brilliant idea

Very enjoyable, both an excuse to jerk off and as a piece of writing. I felt like I wanted to continue reading, I’ve never played tabletop d&d, so some of it is unfamiliar, but it didn’t detract from the story. 5* and followed!

Well, i love to play D&D, but like this? Even better. Great story so far.

I love this d&d player role-playing stuff. Love the new direction. Can't wait for more

bhojo caught my only comment or complaint about this story! When in doubt fuck your way out of trouble!

One of my players showed me this story and the moment Tess took Mark in her mouth she followed suit with me. Great read.

Anony,

Do you have room in your group?

Delightfully enjoyable, I both laughed and was turned-on by the story. It could have used another slow read to catch the errors, but nothing too serious to ruin the mood. Could have used mention of a previous incident, probably while Tess and her now husband dated, where she gave a bj to another guy while he watched, it would have made the transition to her going down on Mark more believable, instead of all of a sudden her dropping to her knees. Either that or a prior conversation about opening up their marriage, or a fight where she seriously wanted to get back at him. I think you may have tried going in the latter direction, but it needed more development. I look forward to reading the rest of the story. Again, well done. 5 stars.

This one blew me away.. I'm not a d&d player but now i want to be.. if i had friends like that.. 🤣

parallel plots performed n paced perfectly 5*

adventurous players make an exciting game,

transcended unbelievability, a treasure indeed ;)

I'm not a D&D player, but even the non-erotic bits had me on the edge of my seat. I even laughed out loud a couple of times. Superb writing! The erotic bits were excellent. The interludes with comedy and drama eased the erotic tension, almost letting it be forgotten. That meant the next erotic scene had the full power of zero to climax. Well done!

As a D&D player,of many years (after all with BardnotBard as a name what else could I be?) and a reader of erotica also of many years I was really looking forward to this. Whilst I can't imagine this happening in our group I really loved the whole story. Homebrew rules allows so much latitude in a game so I'm not expecting it to follow 5e or 3.5 I just loved the story for what it is, fun semi believable, not as hell and wonderfully written. Thanks again. I really should get myself registered in here

I'm very familiar with D&D and I genously love this story@

Awesome storyline and plot twisting.

I find myself emitting exclamations of unexpected joy at climatic moments.

Brilliantly written. I am looking forward to reading the next chapters.

5 stars from me!

Great characters and a great build, both loving and sexy. Lots of fun.