by Publius68
Really liked this story, but the location continuity issues were distracting. For example:
"that shit had better come out of my felt.
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I decided to let her bring it up. By the time we got home, well"
This makes it sound like his pool table is not at his house, which is possible but it would have had to move from one of the earlier chapters. Really fun and well written though, 5*
I don't really know anything about D&D, but I loved your stories. You had plenty of oral sex and , thank the stars, no anal.
While I'm a Role Player and that aspect appealed to me I finally realized what I really liked about this series. The action was fun abd kinda random and felt like a game show with random contestants. The characters don't feel like it's a sex story and the 'larping-only' ethic was refreshing.
Great story! I’m a newer D&D player and loved being in the DM’s head. The sex scenes were tantalizing and believable. Can’t wait to read the rest of your stories. Very well written!
oh my what a cliffhanger, 5* as usual
eagerly anticipating galas return
as the indefatigable love priestess
as pregnancy hormones supersex anne
for an overwhelming need to be gangbanged
Outstanding! 7 stars. I really hate for the series to end, but I guess it might be too complicated to continue with pregnant sex and sharing the beauty / eroticism of nursing. Just for the record, though, I'm a fan of both.
I am only tangential with d&d, friends that play but never got into myself. I larped once at a friends request but then got kicked out because I was "too rough."
This has been my favorite thing I've read on this site. So much so I half wish I could write it as a screenplay and develop it as a fun skinamax series.
I genuinely hope you come back to this because it's really been quite excellent.
A person has to be totally twisted, demented and sick to write a story like this. I love that in a person. Great five star story!!
5 stars from me, so wish it could be more. What a great series, think it may be my favourite set of yours. Loved the RPG theme and the character development was great. Superbly written (the errors don't spoil it for me, just stop it being brilliant). I'm hoping for a sequel. Thanks again, your fan BardnotBard.
Loved your story, 5 Stars!! I’m always intrigued, however, by the idea that women fall rather easily into licking each other’s cunts, while the thought of touching another naked man causes intense fear and loathing!! I had a Mistress in San Diego who made me play a risk and reward game with her and 2 other Mistresses. One of the punishments was to suck her submissive Lloyd’s cock and try to make him come in ten minutes! I found it humiliating but incredibly exciting!! Always wonder why it only appears in the “Gay” section but woman in every section can’t wait to lick their first pudding!!!
Extremely well developed story. Author deserves 5 stars - combining nerdy and sexual intricacies to the best. Excellent work!
Absolutely wonderful! Not only is it unbelievably erotic, it made me laugh, again and again!! The poor Bears... if I ever run a game that can compare I'll pour one out in your honor
Been a long time since I actually read something start to finish on this sight. This was worth it. Well done.
If I had any constructive feedback it would be having major characters named Mark, Martin, and Martienne in the same story was a mistake. Try not to have names step on each other's toes visually or audibly in the future.
Otherwise, 5 stars. Tess was my favorite character.
Maybe I should go back to my notes about a D&D campaign turned hypersexualized. I like how you did the in character bits, stealing it I might be able to make my story work.
I’m neither a LARPer nor have ever played D&D, yet thoroughly enjoyed this story line— and would love to see it continued, with pregnancies. Not with small children, however— that’s beyond the pale.
Another great story by a great writer (I think I have just about read all of them and learnt a lot).
(Only minor query was twice things happend on 'his pool table' and then 'when we got home'.
On another note, I agree with redsilver about names and I am a bit dislexic and having had to re-read bits of another author's story to clarify between Kate, Katherine and Karen, So I decided name in alphabetical sequence, for my benefit as well as the reader. Alex, Bella, Carol, Dan ... and in another series: Alice, Billy, Calumn, Donna, Eric ... It helped with suddenly Alice became Alison and I could quickly search and replace!
Truly well-written and entertaining. Thanks for sharing that with the rest of us.
Great work. I'm a multi decade roleplayer, played all the editions, and many systems besides D&D. This type of story is certainly the type of fantasy that runs in my head personally. That is juxtaposed by the fact that I play in two groups that are male only. So it will stay in the mind, but, I can dream.