All Comments on 'Durmantravada Ch. 03'

In the first 2 chapters, I felt like I am going to read a classic from Indian author but this part is fast paced and short. Please do publish lengthy parts.

I would enjoy a slow tease. More story and adequate sex would be fine. I like this story but would really appreciate if the story was longer. Than you for the story.

let all comment ,its their part to do so, but never stop . you have amazing talent keep it up

Waiting for next part

I have absolutely noooooo critiques just praise for all three chapters thus far!!! The stories are impossible to put down and As much as I’ve been very much enjoying the business between the siblings, I am so so so waiting for the inevitable mother son breach. Thank you for sharing your craft!!!

I have read all the parts and like most of the other readers I am waiting for the next parts of the story, please release them sooner than later just an request.

The story is progressing very nicely and has me engrossed. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please make the chapters longer if you can...

The plot has good build-up. But the intimate scenes and their development are rushed without adequate description or build-up.

You can take inspiration from youbadboy, Xarth, yourawful or alwayswantedto's stories for that bit. Will take your stories to another level altogether.

It's well over 13 days since Chapter 3 :)) Pls, pls get us the next one..The plotline shows great promise and you developing the characters well..

It's been a long time now..... Pls. Upload next part pls asap...... Can't wait for the mother n son sagaaa

Hello I'm waiting since last 6 months now for the next part.... And this is my second Comment.... Pls. Submit the next mother son saga asap......