All Comments on 'Dust to Dust Ch. 04'

A great story that involves several story lines, and past characters, all the while keeping the story on its intended path.

If it haden't said "To be Continued" I would have been mightily disappointed but Im almost always disappointed with whatever ending (I always want more). But other than that, youre stories are among the absolut best in my opinion and your characters are almost everything I want the stories characters to be, everyone of them.

You're killing me here :) I keep on checking every day to see if you've posted a new part to this story, and now this part is gonna have me chomping at the bit for more. Can't wait for the next part ^_^

FANTASTIC SERIES!!!

I love this series, so much character buildup. I've been hoping from the very beginning for a Dusty-Ash pairing, I'm so glad it finally happened!

5 stars,

My errata for this story

They approached the smoking whole in the side => not whole , hole

She certainly remembered "click" noise. => a "click" noise

Ash put the puppy down and watched in scamper => watched it

I was didn't like what my nest wanted me to be. => I was.... didn't like what my nest wanted me to be.

sense that Ashley was going to climax again even for the girl herself did. => even before

Im so taken by this extraordinary chapter ...... Sssssoooooooo unbelievable ENCHANTING ......... Your writing is definitely ART ........ Thank you for sharing this beautiful poetry