All Comments on 'DVD Night Ch. 02'

even close to erotic

This was non erotic rutting by trailer trash characters Formulaic drivel 1*Cuckold crap

Come on man just stop if you can't do any better than that! Your fucking 12 year old fantasies are pissing everybody off! Fuck his slut of a wife too as I'd kick her fucking ass to the curb!

You just had to have the husband get locked out and then jack off watching through the fucking window? Let me guess you are another sick ass fucking wimpy cuckold!? You have to have a fucking sick mind to get turned on by this shit! Not to mention how fucked up you'd have to be to write it! Sorry Scott but you are a sick fucker!!!

by the lack of any obvious story-telling skill.

did he fuck his sister when he walked her home?

Do a count sometime with Find in Word.

As others said, this is just a story, not a reason to become all moral about the actions of the characters. Fantasy should remain just that; fantasy.

They use "realise" and "recognise". They are not British variants of the words, it's how they were originally spelled.

A real piece of shit, terrible even for a cuck story.