All Comments on 'Dweeb Ch. 08 - Resolution'

Another intensely erotic chapter! Wonderful story telling! So very well written and descriptive, I felt like being there, watching it unfold with every detail in the cinema of my mind. I cannot wait for the next chapter, thank you very much MP2!

Marvelous, loved the idea that Edgar drugged Bernice to have sex with Suzie. What if she was not yet completely out but semi-consciously watched her husband and her daughter in a dreamlike haze. Next day she is not sure if what she thinks she saw wasn’t just a dream, conjuring up images of her fellating her brother on the couch in their parents’ living room and subconsciously replacing these images of herself and her brother with her husband and her daughter. Or was it really happening what she thinks she saw? This series is so good, fires up the fantasy so much!! 5 stars are not enough!

You are kind, Anonymous, and generous with your praise. Thanks for reading and enjoying my work. MP2 :-)

Congratulations, Anonymous, for picking up on the single line in a former chapter where we learn that Bernice lost her virginity to her brother, and then using that information to spin off into a 'What if...' scenario. That isn't where I was taking this story (so it's not a spoiler to the other readers) but it is, indeed, an intriguing idea. Thanks for reading! MP2 :-)