All Comments on 'Dying for Sex'

I liked it, not because they got their just rewards; but because that’s how affairs dometimes end: bloody, messy and everyone loses.

That was hilarious

wow that was a fucked ending could always release another version of the story with a better ending. sorry man great story but that ending fucked everything up

wow that was a fucked ending could always release another version of the story with a better ending. sorry man great story but that ending fucked everything up

In Literotica fantasy world where the dad, neighbors, son’s friends, and assorted others invariably join in, this ending is how these things sometimes end; ruined lives, terminated relationships or even death.

British vocabulary is the least sexy on Earth.

Definitely not expecting that.

Guess he wasn't a willing cuck after all, which is just bizarre considering the author is obviously a brit, the home to 99.9% of all the world's limp-dicked beta male cucks.

Interesting and good written story and thumbs up for the ending. Most authors on lit wouldnt dream to write a realistic ending. This one is just more final but not unheard of in the world outside of fantasy.

This is truly one of the best ways to end a story compared to all the "everybody joins in" endings out there. I just wish you could have made the son more of a pervert who uses his mom.

That was a hot story but definitely a different fucked up ending. Probably more realistic then one would expect . Certainly jealousy makes even the most sane of people do crazy shit.

Not the ending i expected or would want but still 5/5 for the writing.

Still loved it….and kinda expected with the title…..personally I was hoping the son kills the dad, not the other way around…. :p

Not what I was expecting. I actually like the ending. Lol. This was a great story.

So OK it was hot sexy and well written. As long as you don't make a habit of this sort of ending I'll stick around. You are still on my follow list but I expect the next one to have a more palatable ending. 😉

Cheers

SAGE

It's some sensitive ass people on this site. The title was a dead giveaway. Not every story has a happy ending. And Miss D mena always has happy endings. The one time she doesn't and people bitch about it and screw her on her rating

And I apologize for the one star I gave it, the world is a dangerous place if you cross the line... Just kidding about the apology.

Great tale well told and the perfect ending. Whatever you write you won't be able to please everybody so it's good to kick over the traces sometimes. Tell it how it might really be, once in a while. 5/5!

Brutal ending for sure, I was more upset about Jordan forcing himself on his mother in the beginning. Still a good story, just not what I expected in the end.

It actually ended as I had anticipated, "dying for sex"!

Life is what happens to us, not what we wish/plan.

Thanks.

Good story

Legit

A double homicide is an extremely poor ending!!!!! The big mistake they made was not retrieving the husband's house keys when he moved out.

Good story. hate the ending. AAAA+++

Mediocre middling story, HORRENDOUS ending!!!!

I could have done without the use of the word fanny so many times. The word pussy is universal. As for the ending. I liked it ..... a lot. Any na sayer commenters have never had their marriage ruined by a cheater.

The husband, poor bastard, worked every day to provide for his family and what was his reward. Plus, the wife and son both had thoughts of getting rid of the husband permanently.

The lack of dialogue in this story really hinders the reader in getting into the motivations of the main characters. Stories of this genre are always better understood when the characters are verbally interacting.

Rape is not sexy. Turned me off. Sorry.

Not my favorite kind of finale, but it was still an excellent read...

Loved it, incedently, in England we use the word fanny as opposed to pussy

I'm a happy ending addict, but this was precisely the ending those two deserved.

Good story. Didn't like the idea of getting rid of the husband permanently or the ending. Not a fan of death scenes, but am aware not all stories have happy endings. 4⭐

Good story, just not overly keen on the bloodthirsty ending though.

A good read, though the ending is quite a departure from your usual, shows your diversity, good job.

Your right not every relationship has a happy ending but they don't end up with murder you have a twisted mind I have to say I like it lmao as for story in a whole well the forcing her into at the start ruined it for me really it doesn't matter if she started to wanting him it was still rape I only kept reading cause I started the story so I had to finish the twist at the end did help it quite a bit but the rape was still a big no no it's an average story balancing everything out

1 other thing you use fanny in the wrong complex fanny isn't in terms of pussy but is in terms of the ass in any country the term for pussy would be either cunt or cunny or as even said quem you already showed the son was at least bisexual so that could have been a possible ending him raping the dad but glad you didn't go that route no 1 wants to read about gay sex

Mfkndragon, google isn't hard to use. Fanny refers to the female sexual organ in just about every country that was once a colony of Britain, other than the US and Canada. Seriously, Google it.

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MissDMena, I understand the low score, but disagree with the reviewers. This was an excellent depiction of one of the potential consequences of actually acting out some of the insane erotic fantasies on Literotica in real life.

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In reality, very few men would be "instantly cowed" by their son's virility, or their wife's callous cruelty. Very few men would be too afraid of humiliation to strike out at people who had betrayed them so utterly. Seriously, people die from arguments about hot pockets. You think a brother can cuck a brother, a son cuck a father (or vice versa!) etc, and it'll be fine for everyone but the poor cuckolded bastard? Riiight.

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Escape and fantasy is all well and good, but there's a place for reality checks, as well.

5*

To the person who last comment I only go by what the term means in north America which is the ass as I don't live anywhere else no need to look up from another country is there so again I was right you talk about Google you try it sometimes though Google is not correct half the time you still might be surprised what you could learn when you are able to carry on a conversation then comment otherwise no 1 has time for little boys