All Comments on 'Dying to Come Out Ch. 03'

I'm glad you are back..Looking forward to reading more!!

This story had me from the first sentence! I was totally engrossed and was sad it ended, lol. Well writen, but with some minor grammatical errors. I really enjoyed your story!

loved every word! please post more often

Yes!! Finally, the ending I've been waiting for! Excellent story, hope you decide to write part 4 :)

I was so happy they got back together and got married. They were meant for each other. If you can write another story like this one, I would love that

It's a great story, but I'm dying to know who Carol's girlfriend is.

It was truly a shame when I heard that S.J. passed away. She was a talented writer and her stories will be missed. I hope that her family is doing well.

An enjoyable story over the three chapters and I've given you five stars for each one. But... you could have done with some sharp editing here and there---there were a lot of typos and (apparently) missing words. And we never did find out who Carol was dating.