All Comments on 'Dylan Makes a Wish'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great start!

Very nice and slow build. I’d love to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great start

This is very good id urge you to continue

MarkT63MarkT63almost 3 years ago

Good first story!!! Love the Genie and Mind Control stories!!!

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