All Comments on 'Dystopia Pt. 05'

Wow, a three-year break from the story, huh?

I discovered you a couple years ago with Iona Online. I loved it, but when you eventually stopped posting chapters, I figured it had finally been abandoned the same as your earlier story had.

I'm glad to see that you've published something again, and I hope it means you're at a place in life where you're able to do so regularly!

You honestly made my day, it wasn't a very good day but still, I'm glad you're back and I hope we don't have to wait three more years before we get a new chapter

Surprised you went with dystopia instead of IO whatever the reason glad you are back and hope to see more posts.

This is one of my all-time fav stories. I enjoyed your writing and the personality of both the main characters. I also like where this story is set in. The world-building thorough out the chapters was simply amazing and well thought out. I hope you continue this into many chapters.

Here are some ways I'd like to see the story progress, just some of my ideas/ fantasies:

- Emil finds buys Isla her sister to make her happy as a surprise. (Threesome)

- Jealousy between the sisters.

Brittany,

I'm glad to see my comment on AO3 helped to light a fire under your ass haha. I haven't been able to stop thinking about this story, thank you so much for the update and the name drop. This chapter was fricken great. You've got real talent and I can't wait to see where you continue to take this. Never stop writing.

Brittany,

Also hell no on the sister threesome suggestion by another commenter. Don't do me dirty like that.

Great story early awaiting for more. Please releases the next one. Thank you.

Great series, keep it up! I’ve been a fan for awhile and was pleasantly surprised to see part 5 when it was released, eagerly looking forward to the next part, I see how this series could grow and grow developing numerous plots and directions. Again love it and can’t wait for the next installment.

Awesome story. Please don't stop writing. Awaiting the next chapter

Hate the cliff hanger. Though, its a classic construct and works well. Now I hope next chapter comes sooner than this one came compared to previous one ;-)

Admit am envious, great imagination to populate this universe. Liked how the smiths where introduced. Will Faile save him from Markhem?

Next update please

Enjoyed all parts greatly. Next Chapter?

Great story, great world building.

I still hope for a continuation.

Isla and Emil are both too adorkable

I stumbled upon this story and it's great. Easily one of the best stories I've read in a long time. I'd love to see it continue. Please tell us what happens after that cliffhanger!

Do you plan on continuing this story? If so, please let the internet know, it’s easily one of the best stories I’ve read in a long time.

MORE!

Been bouncing from book to book lately, not really able to get into anything. Stumbling upon this story was wonderful. Haven't been pulled in like that for a while. I see you're not really active, but I hope we all can finish this story someday. Thank you. I hope life's treating you well.

Not sure if I should rate this according to the quality of the writing or the number of years it's taken to leave the audience hanging on an unfinished story - my disappointment has won

This is such a good story. Please, please continue!

Awesome story! Love the dystopian story line!