by intriguess
Very good story. Cute ending. I enjoyed it very much. Keep up the good work!
By spelling out the bare minimum, intriguess creates a kind "Lost"-esque mystery vibe, leaving a lot to the imagination.
I really like the idea of being intimate with someone totally anonymous, in an environment outside of normal reality. Add sight deprivation to the mix and you have the recipe for pure guilt-free abandon.
I'm sorry. But I need more than this for any fair comment. If this is the beginning of a multi-chapter story may I suggest more than 1 page? If this is the whole story WTF?!