All Comments on 'Eager Beaver'

Now that Aaron and his mom have done the nasty, they need to get a little more vocal when they are cumming. "Oh mom, you pussy feels so fucking good." "Oh Aaron, harder baby, oh yes, oh honey, just like that, fuck me."

Well paced as the story develops. The ending, while somewhat of a surprise, was superb!

Ive read this before, where ?

I really liked the story but I didn't like how you kept calling her the parent or telling us her age. Once or twice is enough.Is there a reason for that? Great story though!

Wow what a eager beaver. Rated 5*.

I like the eagerness of Aron for taking his mom. And what I most like is reluctant mom for such taboo behaviour. Diane is a way too good as a mother. But at last she given what her son wanted from her.

Too good and seductive story. I liked Aron making his mom slowly his own woman.

Liked slow seduction scenes happening in home, hotel, ballroom and webcam.

I like it's slow build up, the son has really passion for his mother

Very hot. Love longer stories like this!

Very well written. You have a flair. Keep up the good work. :)

What about the sister? She never came home? Or doesn’t question their relationship....

The opening paragraph was clumsy enough, and it went rapidly downhill from there. Some of the language errors almost had an ESL bent to them, but I suspect English actually *is* your first language.

Here's an example of the clunky writing: "We reached Morgan's diner after her shower..." If you can't see what's wrong with that, I suggest a writing course may be in order.

Your writing is good until you get to the sex scene and then you turn into a 13 year old.

Wait tell me you aren't 13!!! Make Love to a woman and then use that experience to write the scenes 😉... Keep trying. Don't give up.

A good storyline. You did the buildup well, You hinted at other elements, like back stories, How her sister's criticalness developed, or how the passion progressed, but did not completely "flesh them out". Work with a good developmental editor to help if you have issues. It could change stories like this from good to great!

"Confused

Ive read this before, where ?"

Exactly my problem with this story... It looks like I have read a similar one or the same ?

@Anonymous

I agree, I've read this before but can't think why or how???

It's like it has or had a different title.

That blew the story...2 stars

Just another manipulative son story.

One of my favorite stories.

Sweet, sweet, sweet...I LOVE it!

Shame on the nay-sayers...shame, shame! Simple Mom-and-Son love story, goes on forever...

What a shame you really could’ve continued on with this story. Did he graduate and what job did he get into , did they eventually have kids, I can go on and on. Sorry, for me you were just getting into the storyline and then you ended it this was just half a story . Still I gave you ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

This story is right at the top of my favorites. I look forward to more.

Exciting story. But why the son did not even eat his mother’s pussy even for once? And also for sure incest is a very delicate matter that you should not be doing in some other house where you could get caught and get in trouble.