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by I_Am_Yours

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Stunning prose!!

I've only read the first few paragraphs but damn you can write! You have a beautiful way with words. Might have to bookmark this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Absolutely beautiful. Left me in tears.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wow

Wonderful writing. Beautiful detail. Left me absolutely breathless nd cannot wait for the next installment. You are a fantastic writer

pieces_of_flairpieces_of_flairover 5 years ago
Beautifully written

Your writing is beautiful, vivid and evocative. You do an amazing job of capturing how it feels to crave submission. I can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wow

I’m not one to leave a comment on these but really, wow. This was so wonderfully written. Please, keep going.

I_Am_YoursI_Am_Yoursover 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you so much for these comments about the writing! This first chapter sets the stage - I promise there will be more sexy details in part 2. Should be published any day now!

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