All Comments on 'Early Delivery'

by Kylie24

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Corsair46Corsair46almost 10 years ago
Good Job

Kylie,

This type story is not on my usual reading list, but you did a superb job. You are a very good writer, I will continue to look for your works.

Corsair

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Very well done. Hope there's a sequel!

drmac100drmac100almost 10 years ago
Very good.

This has a lot of potential, keep going. I looked at your bio curious about your age because of your writing style, but it only said over 18.

I will be waiting for part 2.

plumberdonplumberdonalmost 10 years ago
well done

A great job of telling a lovely story. Keep up the good work and please tell us more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Some grammar bits were off, but the story was awesome :D

DebbieWrightDebbieWrightalmost 10 years ago
Gorgeous

Just gorgeous. It unlocks so many of my secret fantasies.

captainhappycaptainhappyover 9 years ago
Very nice!

There's a really warm and touching aspect to the way the two characters interact. Sort of romance meets lust and curiosity. Well written!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Man hating disguised as a lesbian story. Give me a break.

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