All Comments on 'Early Riser'

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sbabsbababout 8 years ago

I got up at 4 this morning. imagination is a wonderful thing, dare I put my hands where only my late husband went before?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great story

Wow.... Great story, just the right pace and very erotic. Fantastic

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Oh my, loved it . .. OMG my pants are off now and I am primed and ready. . . love the story. . Write more, . .

hindsight2020hindsight2020about 8 years ago
Great journey

into the mind of a weak willed woman. Amazing how little effort she made to spice up or fix her marriage. So much easier to not work at the primary relationship.

mindventuremindventureabout 8 years ago
Love your writing style......

Beautifully written. Just discovered you. Fortunately, you have a large body of work for me to enjoy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Really really hot! The timing and build up is great, making me beat my meat until I also got a nice release.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

There has to be a ‘Rub’ to agitation or enflame and in this case there are a few. Betrayal (cheating) and risk (doing it at work), but when you add the fact that she demanded this attention, especially when she saw what he was packing, the whole situation escalated. She was in need and no same man could resist her, especially her words.

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