by LordNaughty
I always feel compelled to write when I finish a story. Well written but, so far, the story is pretty ordinary. Obviously there is more to come and I will search them out.
The woman character discovers the art of watching a naked man in the wee small hours of the morning, until he heads for work - fully dressed. She discovers watching to be delicious, secretive, and addictive. Good Story.
Oh what a wonderful tale you tell and how wonderfully you tell it. I will be the early riser each morning to see what new adventure your voyeur has been through.
Having never written anything I cannot comment except to say that Early Riser Ch. 01 is easy and fun to read and seems to be free of basic spelling and grammar errors.
I look forward to all of your future submissions and will check on your past submissions for more fun.
Thanks and keep up the excellent work!
Rockcrawler