All Comments on 'Earth - Tentacle Breeding Ground Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This is about to be the longest week after that cliffhanger! Amazing job as always!

worldenderworldenderabout 3 years agoAuthor

Wow thanks for all the positive reviews everyone! I admit I was nervous that a vanilla-focused chapter in the middle of a fetish-heavy story wasn't going to be well received, but it seems I was wrong. I had hoped that my juxtaposing the two styles of erotic scenes it would enhance them both :) ...also I got kinda invested in the characters and wanted to give them a Win haha

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Some areas could use work, but overall the best story here in a while

worldenderworldenderabout 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks! If you have specific feedback, I'd love to hear it! Also chapter 5 is gonna be a little "late" (not that I actually have deadlines haha) because I've been busy :p but stay tuned!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Just read all 4 chapters and absolutely one of the best series here can't wait for more.

worldenderworldenderabout 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks so much! I feel bad having to take my time with chapter 5 haha - I'm reworking several of the plot points in order to allow for a part 2, which I want to get to eventually. After chapter 5 I will write some short side stories and then take a break to plan the second part and also take care of all the other life things I've been putting off in order to crank these out haha... ha... :p thanks for the continued support!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I was sad that DevilBookCorruptions said they weren't going to finish writing their stories (Has anyone even heard from DystopianArtificer?), then I found you. Thank you for such a well-written erotic horror, and such creativity. Those tunnel scenes were sinister and hot af. Please don't quit!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Incredible series so far!!! One of my favorites of all time!!! Also if i may, you should play around more with different pov changes like you did in part 1 with Diana... that was really hot and it shows your skills as an erotic autor. Anyhow keep up the good work mate and don't be sorry for being "late". I am sure it will be well worth the wait!!! =)))

worldenderworldenderabout 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you! Chapter 5 has a POV swap to Zoey, which I think people will enjoy ;) Still hoping to get it out by the end of the week (Lit takes a few days to publish after I upload so it's a bit of coin toss) - so thanks for the kind words until then!

lxknvlklxknvlkabout 3 years ago

Great series, looking forward to next chapter.

nethen31nethen31about 3 years ago

Best set of stories I’ve read in a while!

worldenderworldenderabout 3 years agoAuthor

@Papercrafter:

Haha I know I know; I'm sorry! I kinda put off a lot for stuff than I realized in order to write all those chapters in a row (I basically used all my free time to write) so now I've had to take care of other projects and my gf who was demanded attention :p I have the chapter half-written right now and I'm HOPING to have it done for Sunday, which means Lit will publish it on Wednesday. Stay strong, my friend and thanks for the excitement! It keeps me motivated knowing people are so eager!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Nice hearing from you man!!!! Can't wait for chapter 5 though!!!!! I'm sure it will be worth the wait!!! Cheers to you!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Part 5 Plssss!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Chapter 5 mate!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

damn i want chapter 5.

you gotta keep writing these style stories

worldenderworldenderabout 3 years agoAuthor

You guys are killin me xD I'm putting off playing RE8 on release night just to finish this chapter for you all :p I kinda ran into another situation where I had wayyyy too much for a single chapter, so I had to break it up into two somewhat smaller chapters. It should hopefully hold you over until I get out Chapter 6, which will hopefully be back on a week schedule now that my life has settled down a little. Lit takes a while to publish after I upload, so HOPEFULLY it's up on Sunday but maybe Monday. Thanks for the patience all! Hopefully this chapter satisfies you folks. I'm not super happy with it tbh but if you're horny, it will probably do the job xD

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

As long as it’s similar to what you’ve put up with 1-3 it will be perfect and keep the horn dogs off you for a bit

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