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All Comments on 'East Bay Drive'

by NathanRavenwood

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Bob150BobBob150Bobover 5 years ago
I like it.

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Thank you

That was good writing and great storytelling.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Get an editor!

"Sandwitch", indeed!

Many other errors.

What idiot said "good writing"

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Okay story

A bit predictable however there were too many spelling errors.

PorthosthePoetPorthosthePoetover 5 years ago
A good story, good details

Ignore the trolls! Spelling errors happen, just swing back and fix em when you can. I would say 99% have never written a thing in their life...yet they become hyper critical!

Nice work!

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