All Comments on 'Eating out (with) Mom'

More lots more PLEASE !!!

Huge boobs. Huge cock. No panties on a date with her son. Thanks for sharing.

That's great!continuation

Stupid , unrealistic

Thats a very large back seat

Had to ruin it by bringing in others. Thanks for the threesome tag to warn us off of this misguided plot direction, saving us time.

They are at the breakfast table, presumably having breakfast? Nhalf an hour later they are on their date ?

That, and other slip-ups point to your need to carefully proof read your work. Maybe an editor would help.

A fun, overly exaggerated tale to make us smile,

THANKS FOR THE MEMORIES .

Nice light story. Unrealistic but a lot of fun . Looking forward to seeing more like this.

Really hot hope for a next one!

Well first advice to you is half the comments on lit.e will tell you the story is fine when it clearly not.( you don't get better when people tell you what your doing is great when it simply isn't)

So my first constructive feedback is get a proofreaders or proofread your story before submitting it. Then read it again out loud and see if it makes sense and flows well.

Secondly consider writing down the sequence of events you want to have in the story before you even write anything. The jump in the story goes to show how you didn't plan the story out at all.

** for effort

I'm surprised that you didn't have George walk

I'm surprised that you didn't have George walk into the restaurant with his hard cock hanging out of his pants so every woman there could become mesmerized and line up at the bar begging him to fuck them. That scenario is just as realistic as this one.

@Sex4lf57 I wish we could upvote comments on this site. You are totally right...

Yes, you move everything super fast and perhaps it's not very realistic. But you tell a good story and I find your work fun to read. And part of the success you make of this is that your writing is good enough to propel the reader through the story without problems. Nicely done.

Absolutely hilarious......

I will leave the rest to the critics.

Grammer mistakes kept me from a five.

MORE UPPER CASE WOULD MAKE THIS BORING SHIT SHOW MORE EXCITING, PROBABLY. OR, MAYBE NOT. "grammer" [sic] mistakes from the earlier comment cracked me up, but he's not wrong in the general case. Of course, as you've proven to your readers already, you always phone home to the six foot long cock, your go to when you can't come up with an actual plot.

Part 2 please A.S.A.P.

Unrealistic story but like the rest of his stories worked for me. The only thing I don't like about this author is that leaves some of his stories unfinished, like this one, for example.

Quick and hot, very nice, keep up the good work it's much appreciated 👍🤪

Compared to your other stories, this is a quickie. Though full of errors in grammar, spelling, quotations, and you have no idea how to start and finish a sentence or a paragraph. Your stories need a lot of editing. Yet this story is very erotic; a great vehicle for a great jerk off.

Horny! I fucking loved it made me jerkoff.

So I can see that your stories are good fun

and good nonsense .... ignore the dolts treating them seriously

Fun and amusing story, lovely short fantasy